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jeff the kller vs the rakeEdit
Ohh i love this feeling shouted Jeff the killer without bothering how silly he sounded` earlier he had got himself drunk and got into a fight with someone` but mind you it wasn't the first time. He was walking down the street to put some cans of beer into a dustbin and suddenly he heard a blood curdeling scream coming from the nearby forest` Hey i'm the one who's supposed to be making people scream he muttered to himself so without any thought he got out his pocket knife and started walking into the forest were he heard the scream. I'm going to teach this guy how to dispose of someone without letting them scream and he or she is goung to be my guinnea pig.As Jeff got as close as he could to the place were he heard the scream he saw a sinister trail of fresh blood leading to a quite large cave... and then the trail stopped... right in front of him Jeff saw something that made even him shiver` in front of him was a human corpse` it was a man but this man had suffered horrendous injures` his throat had been ripped out` he had his brain pierced and there was brain tissue all over the place` he had scratches and bite marks all over his body and his organs were hanging out of his stomach eewww that is disturbing even for me he said quitly to himself getting a bit worried at who or what would have done that to him.
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